Persuasive Writing-Rules at School.

14.03.17.

Rules at school

I think we should have rules at school.

Firstly I think we should have rules at school because when we listen and follow the rules we will be safe.

Secondly  I think we should have rules at school   because we will be happy and nice.

Another reason I think we should have rules at school  is because we will have no bullying.

Lastly I think  we should  have rules at school  because  then we can have a happy place.

So I think we should have rules at school.

Google Draw Poster - Healthy Eating.

Persuasive Writing-Healthy Eating.

I am learning to use the correct structure for Persuasive Writing.

30/03/17/  

Healthy eating

                    I think we should eat healthy food

Firstly I think we should eat healthy food because so we can have a healthy heart.

Secondly  think we should eat healthy food because so we can have healthy eyes.

Another reason  think we should eat healthy food because so we can have nutrients in our body.

Lastly I think we should eat healthy food because so we can have tip top shape or condition

So that why we should eat healthy food.

Here are my learning goals for Term 1 2017.

Here is some information I have found from my text about Stingrays.

Recount Writing

I am learning to add my thoughts and feelings to my writing.

13.03.17

Going to the shop

First On Saturday afternoon I went to the shop at Countdown to buy our lunch for school. My mum  went in  second with my dad. I  liked going shopping with my mum.

My nana came with me to the park and we were playing on the park. We were playing for a long time then we walked to the MacDonalds. My mum brought me a Big Mac and we were so excited and I was so happy and grateful. I felt like butterflies in my tummy.

When I was finished my kai I went  back on the park to play on the slide.

Persuasive Writing

I am learning to write my opinion with reasons.

A bucket filling school.

I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school.

First I think Tautoro school should a  bucket filling because being a bucket filling school means every person would be to be caring and kind.

Second we would have a nice school.

Another reason is everyone will feel happy and safe.

So I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school.

I am learning to create a poster with an important message and an image that matches the message.

Persuasive Writing

I am learning to organise my ideas using the correct structure for Persuasive Writing.

10.03.17.                            

Brush your teeth

I think we should brush our teeth every day

Firstly I think we should brush our teeth because then  our teeth can be healthy and nice.

Secondly then we won’t have holes in our teeth.

Another reason why we should brush our teeth is because then we will have nice breath.

Lastly I think we should brush our teeth because then we won’t let our teeth fall out easily.

So I think we should brush our teeth every day.

Persuasive Writing

I am learning to organise my ideas using the correct structure for Persuasive Writing.

It is wrong to fight

03.03.17.

I think it is wrong to fight.

Firstly I think it is wrong to fight because the kids are scared of the fighting yelling and swear words and bad words.

Secondly I think it is wrong to fight because people are yelling at each other.  

Another reason  I think it is wrong to fight because people get angry.

Lastly  I think it is wrong to fight because people will get hurt from each other.

So I think it is  wrong to fight.