Recount Writing

I am learning to add my thoughts and feelings to my writing.

13.03.17

Going to the shop

First On Saturday afternoon I went to the shop at Countdown to buy our lunch for school. My mum  went in  second with my dad. I  liked going shopping with my mum.

My nana came with me to the park and we were playing on the park. We were playing for a long time then we walked to the MacDonalds. My mum brought me a Big Mac and we were so excited and I was so happy and grateful. I felt like butterflies in my tummy.

When I was finished my kai I went  back on the park to play on the slide.