Recount Writing-I went to the park.

WALT add details to help our readers understand our story.

I also added interesting words, talking, similes, feelings and thoughts.

I went to the park.

On a hot blazing Saturday afternoon my whanau and I went in our van to the park in Kaikohe to have some fun.

I felt amazed and proud of myself.

When I got to the park we saw lots of thing to play on. I said, “Hmmm what should I play on first?”

The first thing I did at the park was I played on the monkey bars. I felt pumped  because I love the monkey bars.

Next my dad said that he would buy us some lunch. Our lunch was delicious. “Mmm that was yum,” I said to myself when I was eating. After lunch I was trying to decide what I should choose next to play on. “I know, I will play on the swing,” I said to myself. I felt happy and joyful.

I enjoyed playing on the swing. I was going higher and higher. I felt  super happy. What a great day.

Recount Writing-Watching Moana.

WALT add details in our writing to help our readers to understand our story.                           

Watching Moana.

Yahoo! On a hot blazing Saturday afternoon my family and I stayed home so my dad could get Moana for us to watch.

When we were waiting for the movie my dad told us to go outside to play games. I thought of a game.

I said, “Let's play tag.” We were playing tag for a short time then we started to play another game called Hide and Go Seek. We played for a very very long time. We all enjoyed the game. It was cool.

Then we got called back in to watch Moana.

Mum said, “I’ve got some delicious food like chocolate, ice cream, popcorn and chips.”  When my mum bought our yummy food to us we cheered. “Yay! Thanks Mum.”

Finally dad played the movie for us and then the movie started. We loved watching Moana. It’s our favourite movie. We choose to watch it every time.