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Watching Moana.
Yahoo! On a hot blazing Saturday afternoon my family and I stayed home so my dad could get Moana for us to watch.
When we were waiting for the movie my dad told us to go outside to play games. I thought of a game.
I said, “Let's play tag.” We were playing tag for a short time then we started to play another game called Hide and Go Seek. We played for a very very long time. We all enjoyed the game. It was cool.
Then we got called back in to watch Moana.
Mum said, “I’ve got some delicious food like chocolate, ice cream, popcorn and chips.” When my mum bought our yummy food to us we cheered. “Yay! Thanks Mum.”
Finally dad played the movie for us and then the movie started. We loved watching Moana. It’s our favourite movie. We choose to watch it every time.
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