I think i scored rubric 4 because I used my capital letters and full stops and my punctuation correctly. Watching Moana.
Yahoo! On a wet stormy Saturday afternoon my family and I stayed home so my dad could get Moana for us to watch.
When we were waiting for the movie my dad told us to go up stairs to have some lunch. I thought we should have delicious burgers.
They said, “Ok let’s have burgers for lunch then.” It was delicious.
Then we got called back downstairs to watch Moana.
Mum said, “I’ve got some delicious food like chocolate, ice cream, popcorn and chips.” When my mum called us downstairs my mum gave us our yummy food. So we all cheered. “Yay! Thanks Mum.”
Finally dad played the movie for us and then the movie started. We loved watching Moana. It’s our favourite movie. We choose to watch it every time. I love Moana. It's a very cool movie.
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