Recount Writing-At Parakai springs.

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At Parakai springs.

On Monday morning my Aunty Tracy came to pick me up at 9:00.
She came with Pounamu, Piripi,and Aunty Tracy. First I went to go say bye to mum.
After that we went to the shop to buy a drink. Then we left Kaikohe.

It was lonely without us like a cloud. It took us a long time to get there.
So instead of me and Pounamu being bored, I said “Should we play a car game?’’

Then my aunty said, “Can I play?’’ We both said “Ok.”
I chose red, Aunty Tracy got 20 because she chose blue. A blue car came straight away.
Pounamu won with 156 because she chose PURPLE. Then we arrived at

Parakai springs. Aunty Tracy went straight to the pools to pay so we could go in.
Then we went to the camping area. We were so far from the pools.
When we got out of the van we set up the tent and then we put  on our togs. When we were
walking to the pools my Aunt asked, "Should we bring the volleyball?”.

We all said “OK”. When we got there the first thing we went on was the fast slide.

But when we got up there Piripi ditched me straight away. I opened my eyes
and shouted ahhhhhhhhhh. When I was  going down it was dark and I thought I was going

to stop breathing. But when I made it I thought I was going to drown.

Lastly we went to the spark to get warmed up. We stayed there until 6.00.
Then me and Piripi went to the slides. So Piripi chucked the boards down and then
he went down without a mat. I found a mat and I went down with one. Instead

of Piripi going all the way, he stopped me and other people.
Since it was cold we both hit the spark until 9.00.Then we went back to have dinner.

WHAT A CURIOUS DAY AT PARAKAI SPRINGS.