Writing-at the beach.

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At the beach.29.8.18

Yippy yi yay! On a lovely Saturday morning I woke up
and my Dad said, “Come on you sleepy heads come
and have breakfast.” He wanted us to hurry up because
we were going at 9.30 to the beach. It was Paihia
beach. First me and my sister Jean went upstairs to
have breakfast. I had porridge that my mum makes.
She makes delicious porridge. It was as yummy as
pancake. Then when I finished my breakfast I went to
get my stuff ready. I got my spare clothes so I could
have a swim. When I was just finished everybody was
finished as well. Me and Taonga went to play outside.
We started to play hide and go seek. Taonga was it.
He couldn't find me. It was  so hard. Then my big
sisters came out and asked, “What are you playing?”
We both shouted, “Hide and go seek!” We had a dog.
He was playing with us too. He was hiding with me so
I said, “Don’t bark or Taonga will find us.” So my dog
did not do anything. He just sat there. Later on they
all found me. Shortly after Taonga found me, we were
ready to go. “Yay! Finally we’re going!” we shouted.

It was a long way to get to the beach. When we got
there, I asked my mum and dad, “Can we go to
Waitangi please?” My mum said, “Why do you want to
go there?” I said, “Because that's our activity.”                                                                          So they both said, “O.K. let's go then.” When we were finished at Waitangi we went back to the beach. When we got to the beach I saw a lot of people. There were over 80 people. Some were swimming, some were walking along the beach, some were having a picnic, some were building sandcastles and some were just sitting on the sand.

We were excited to be at the beach. We had a lovely
swim and we did lots of beach activities. It was a cool
fun day for me and my family.